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Drawn tonight, October 29, 2009.

:iconskyline07:'s commission... Fastest I've ever gotten a lineart done. xD; He just asked about an hour ago...

Ugh. It's supposed to be a genderbend, but it really fails... :/

Used a ref for the bloodied hand, but I can't find the link anymore.

Bah. >_>

Tired. ._.

ALSO. I know the ear's off. I forgot to erase it. Dx

Critiques


:iconpkingsora:
I am enjoying this image very much, tthere head to body ratio needs alittle work, the bloody hand looks well done aswell as your subejct's breast area x///x. the arm with the blade seems a tad bit stiff..perhaps bring the eldbow inward abit? I noticed you paied great attention to how the clothes fold on the subjects' body. I think you executed this well in some parts, the area from the naval to the hips seems abit squished to me. the crotch area where the right light* her left) meets the behind needs to be lifted. good job on the thickness of the legs and hips though
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:iconcloud9saul:
Upon viewing the drawing I immediately notice the figure's left shoulder. A few things on this figure seem to be out of proportion.

Everything from the neck to the shoulder seems to be pulled leftward, while the rest of the body is positioned to face off to the right. The left arm should be lowered at the shoulder until it just barely peeks up above the figure's left breast.

The second biggest issue is that her left eye seems to be pulled too far to the right, making her face seem almost flattened. Moving the eye approximately one iris-width to the left would relieve any strain the viewer may have with proportion.
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:iconniona:
wow... i like the pose man... like... that's awesome... o.o.
only thing i can like really spot currently is the right shoulder looks a little odd to me but i dunno.... yea... plah! >_>
:iconbadcupid:
For some reason, I really like her hips :3

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:iconkandasukousei:
O: Thanks! <3

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:iconkandasukousei:
>w< Heehee, thanks~

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:iconkandasukousei:
Ah, really? owo

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:iconkandasukousei:
OwO What, really~? <333 Thanks!

Ah, right. -Nodnod.- I'll see if I can fix that. I'm so glad I'm getting more critiques, now~ You're always so helpful! <3333~

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